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	Thanks, [[User:ModlordD\|ModlordD]] ([[User talk:ModlordD\|talk]]) 02:30, 18 April 2026 (UTC)		Thanks, [[User:ModlordD\|ModlordD]] ([[User talk:ModlordD\|talk]]) 02:30, 18 April 2026 (UTC)

			:@[[User:ModlordD\|ModlordD]] one thing that sticks out to me at a glance is the lack of a reception, analysis, etc section for the character. This is needed on any fictional character article, and I would argue its scope is likely not entirely comprehensive without it.
			:I'd also try to shorten the "In other media" section, since at present it's currently longer than a good chunk of the article. Try shortening it down similarly to how other articles do it, since a list of appearances isn't super beneficial to the reader. Magneton Considerer: '''[[User:Pokelego999\|Pokelego999]]''' ([[User Talk:Pokelego999\|Talk]]) ([[Special:Contributions/Pokelego999\|Contribs]]) 02:51, 19 April 2026 (UTC)