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There are some details included which haven't been thoroughly enough edited, I think there were some unnecessary or unrelated things added. I also think there is an overall tone in the page which seems to be like a fan page rather than a more neutral perspective on the artist. Despite that, it is incredibly long and includes sections from each album and other random topics relevant to the artist. There are over 400 citations and most are from magazines or directly from interviews. One smaller section than I would have expected was tours, because his live shows are known for being incredibly fan interactive and |
There are some details included which haven't been thoroughly enough edited, I think there were some unnecessary or unrelated things added. I also think there is an overall tone in the page which seems to be like a fan page rather than a more neutral perspective on the artist. Despite that, it is incredibly long and includes sections from each album and other random topics relevant to the artist. There are over 400 citations and most are from magazines or directly from interviews. One smaller section than I would have expected was tours, because his live shows are known for being incredibly fan interactive and the toured for years non-stop before his hiatus. |
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