User:Lenaamanoel/Marc-Antoine Laugier/Archengr1 Peer Review
Provided some possible improvements that can be made to the current article.
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- I would add more on his work because as of right now the article just mentions one essay that he wrote in 1753 and then revised in 1755, in which he just hates on columns. |
- I would add more on his work because as of right now the article just mentions one essay that he wrote in 1753 and then revised in 1755, in which he just hates on columns. |
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- The article also doesn't really have sections such as education and personal lives, and work and maybe the article would benefit from adding a section such as the ones listed. I believe this would add depth to the article. |
- The article also doesn't really have sections such as education and personal lives, and work and maybe the article would benefit from adding a section such as the ones listed. I believe this would add depth to the article and Marc-Antoine Laugier. |
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General notes on the bibliography and outline: |
General notes on the bibliography and outline: |
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