User talk:Natanga70
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:Hello @[[User:Thilio|Thilio]] could you give me an insight on how I could fix the article because when I was creating it I didn’t see it as promotional. I’m asking because I wouldn’t like to create similar edits in future so your guidance could mean a lot to me as I’m still a new editor. Also I’m going to add more references and build the article more as you suggested but your guidance could be of much help |
:Hello @[[User:Thilio|Thilio]] could you give me an insight on how I could fix the article because when I was creating it I didn’t see it as promotional. I’m asking because I wouldn’t like to create similar edits in future so your guidance could mean a lot to me as I’m still a new editor. Also I’m going to add more references and build the article more as you suggested but your guidance could be of much help |
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:Thanks [[User:Natanga70|Natanga70]] ([[User talk:Natanga70#top|talk]]) 06:04, 20 April 2026 (UTC) |
:Thanks [[User:Natanga70|Natanga70]] ([[User talk:Natanga70#top|talk]]) 06:04, 20 April 2026 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your hard work on this article to fix the article, you need to rewrite it in a neutral WAY and remove all promo words and PR/W like rose to fame, gained more fame and famous brands etc. You state facts directly and make sure it attribute claims to [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] where ncessary. you said you going to add more references but make sure the references you going to add are independent and provide [[WP:SIGCOV|significant coverage]] of the subject not just passing mentions. See [[WP:ANYBIO]], [[WP:RS]] and [[WP:NPOV]]. [[User:Thilio| CONFUSED SPIRIT]][[User talk:Thilio|(Thilio).Talk]] 11:07, 20 April 2026 (UTC) |
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