Talk:Rajesh Maru/GA1
Middlesex
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The final sentence of this section mentions "Middlesex (first) team" twice, and "having not played" is a bit awkward to read. I suggest a split into two sentences. Something like: "Facing competition in the Middlesex team from the left- and right-arm spin combination of Phil Edmonds and John Emburey, Maru struggled to secure a regular place. He did not play for the first team in the 1983 season, and was then released by the county". |
The final sentence of this section mentions "Middlesex (first) team" twice, and "having not played" is a bit awkward to read. I suggest a split into two sentences. Something like: "Facing competition in the Middlesex team from the left- and right-arm spin combination of Phil Edmonds and John Emburey, Maru struggled to secure a regular place. He did not play for the first team in the 1983 season, and was then released by the county". |
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*'''Done'''. Reworded, per your suggestion! [[User:AssociateAffiliate|AA]] ([[User talk:AssociateAffiliate|talk]]) 10:22, 19 April 2026 (UTC) |
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====Hampshire==== |
====Hampshire==== |
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