User:Jellycatgirlie/Economy of Singapore/MarginalEditor Peer Review
I used the questions and gave an evaluation based on the current article
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==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
;'''I am reveiwing Jellycatgirlie's Economy of Singapore'''
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[Economy of Singapore]]
;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Economy of Singapore]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
The Lead been has not been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer. The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. The Lead could do a better job at having a description of the article's major sections becuase there is a lot to this article. The lead overal is okay but could have some improvements but it is not too consise.
As far as edits, Jellycatgirlie's has not made any at this point in time. I did find areas in the article that could benefit from grammer updates. This article does a really good job of linking to other wikipedia pages. I am sure Jellycatgirlie will make great edits to [[Economy of Singapore]] to make it even better!
==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
;'''I am reveiwing Jellycatgirlie's Economy of Singapore'''
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[Economy of Singapore]]
;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Economy of Singapore]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
The Lead been has not been updated to reflect the new content added by my peer. The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. The Lead could do a better job at having a description of the article's major sections becuase there is a lot to this article. The lead overal is okay but could have some improvements but it is not too consise.
As far as edits, Jellycatgirlie's has not made any at this point in time. I did find areas in the article that could benefit from grammer updates. This article does a really good job of linking to other wikipedia pages. I am sure Jellycatgirlie will make great edits to [[Economy of Singapore]] to make it even better!
