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One thing to keep in mind is that you need to be as precise as possible. Saying something like "{{tq|Eventually during 1954 the laws began to change and the segregation laws became less enforced. Arcadia closed its doors}}" is really too vague. Was it just that segregation laws were no longer enforced, or was the school desegregated due to court decisions? And when did the school close? Thinks like that are important bits of information. Even if you can't find precise dates, avoid saying things like "eventually...". That just sounds too vague. [[User:Ian (Wiki Ed)|Ian (Wiki Ed)]] ([[User talk:Ian (Wiki Ed)|talk]]) 21:02, 14 April 2026 (UTC) |
One thing to keep in mind is that you need to be as precise as possible. Saying something like "{{tq|Eventually during 1954 the laws began to change and the segregation laws became less enforced. Arcadia closed its doors}}" is really too vague. Was it just that segregation laws were no longer enforced, or was the school desegregated due to court decisions? And when did the school close? Thinks like that are important bits of information. Even if you can't find precise dates, avoid saying things like "eventually...". That just sounds too vague. [[User:Ian (Wiki Ed)|Ian (Wiki Ed)]] ([[User talk:Ian (Wiki Ed)|talk]]) 21:02, 14 April 2026 (UTC) |
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:Hey Ian could you look at my revise sandbox post and give me feedback [[User:Sfarhood|Sfarhood]] ([[User talk:Sfarhood#top|talk]]) 03:33, 22 April 2026 (UTC) |
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