Wikipedia:Peer review/List of international goals scored by Dimitar Berbatov/archive1

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			=== Comments by AdaCiccone ===
			Here's what I think from after a brief reading.
			*The lead's fourth paragraph has points about criticism of his performances and retirement. Is this information key to understanding the list’s scope? If not, then I'd suggest removing it. Keep the opening prose focused on international scoring record, the significance of the total, and what the list below has.
			*I'm not sure if the hat-trick section, being so few with only one entry, should have its own section. Maybe you could mention its significance at the lead instead?
			*There are some inconsistencies on tournament names, e.g. "UEFA Euro 2008 qualification" and "UEFA Euro 2008 qualifying." I checked both and the former redirects to the latter, which means that's the one you should use consistently across the article. I'd suggest looking for inconsistencies for other stuff too, like date formatting, venue names etc.
			That's it from me. Perhaps there'd be more from other editors. [[User:AdaCiccone\|AdaCiccone]] ([[User talk:AdaCiccone\|talk]]) 07:23, 22 April 2026 (UTC)