User:TartarRules/Love Canal/Pnwalien01 Peer Review
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==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
TartarRules, Herstorybuff124, Captainlou89
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[User:TartarRules/Love Canal/Outline]]:
;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Love Canal]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
* '''Geography:''' Great idea on expanding information about Griffon Manor in the geography section or move that information to a different section. Since Griffon Manor is mentioned seven times in the article, it would be beneficial to add more information so it does not feel out of place. The placement of it in the geography section feels a little randomly placed.
* '''Role of Community Organizations:''' Adding in the CLCRA (Concerned Love Canal Renters Association) was a necessary addition for balance and neutrality. This was a great edit and it is surprising to me that this information was not already provided on the page.
* '''Activism Tactics:''' The added information/subsection about Ecumenical Task Force in the activism section is great, it adds depth and balance by addressing how the marginalization Griffon Manor was experiencing was recognized by many people beyond those being directly effected. The second to last sentence about the underlying racist views of predominantly white homeowners does come across as not one hundred percent neutral, however, if those are the facts and that is how the information was presented in the cited source then there is nothing to consider editing.
* '''Lois Gibbs and the Love Canal Homeowners' Association:''' Fantastic idea about changing the header on this to be more inclusive of all the women involved. Lois Gibbs deserves some kind of mention because it appears that she is the one that created/formed the LCHA? If that is an incorrect statement, it might be worth clearing up within the LCHA section. From what I can tell she is the one that did the organizing for the LCHA but as mentioned in the outline, if there are a list of women who were involved that deserve recognition, they should be recognized as well.
* '''Evacuation:''' It would definitely be a good idea if possible to find a source for this section like was noted in the outline.
* Overall: This is a Wiki page with a lot of information and areas where citations could be added in. The project outline has indicated areas of improvement and made quality edits to the Love Canal page based off what was listed in the outline. The sources used are accessible, trustworthy, and high quality.
==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
TartarRules, Herstorybuff124, Captainlou89
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[User:TartarRules/Love Canal/Outline]]:
;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Love Canal]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
* '''Geography:''' Great idea on expanding information about Griffon Manor in the geography section or move that information to a different section. Since Griffon Manor is mentioned seven times in the article, it would be beneficial to add more information so it does not feel out of place. The placement of it in the geography section feels a little randomly placed.
* '''Role of Community Organizations:''' Adding in the CLCRA (Concerned Love Canal Renters Association) was a necessary addition for balance and neutrality. This was a great edit and it is surprising to me that this information was not already provided on the page.
* '''Activism Tactics:''' The added information/subsection about Ecumenical Task Force in the activism section is great, it adds depth and balance by addressing how the marginalization Griffon Manor was experiencing was recognized by many people beyond those being directly effected. The second to last sentence about the underlying racist views of predominantly white homeowners does come across as not one hundred percent neutral, however, if those are the facts and that is how the information was presented in the cited source then there is nothing to consider editing.
* '''Lois Gibbs and the Love Canal Homeowners' Association:''' Fantastic idea about changing the header on this to be more inclusive of all the women involved. Lois Gibbs deserves some kind of mention because it appears that she is the one that created/formed the LCHA? If that is an incorrect statement, it might be worth clearing up within the LCHA section. From what I can tell she is the one that did the organizing for the LCHA but as mentioned in the outline, if there are a list of women who were involved that deserve recognition, they should be recognized as well.
* '''Evacuation:''' It would definitely be a good idea if possible to find a source for this section like was noted in the outline.
* Overall: This is a Wiki page with a lot of information and areas where citations could be added in. The project outline has indicated areas of improvement and made quality edits to the Love Canal page based off what was listed in the outline. The sources used are accessible, trustworthy, and high quality.
