User:Pet04361/Bioerosion/Squi190 Peer Review
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The lead section is thorough and covers the main points of the article. It goes into a good amount of detail and isn't too detailed or concise. My one suggestion is to split the sentence that starts "On dry land..." into 2, because it is a bit long and difficult to follow, but contains good information that would be easier to understand if broken up. |
The lead section is thorough and covers the main points of the article. It goes into a good amount of detail and isn't too detailed or concise. My one suggestion is to split the sentence that starts "On dry land..." into 2, because it is a bit long and difficult to follow, but contains good information that would be easier to understand if broken up. |
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Content is relevant, thorough, and up to date. I didn't notice anything missing or unrelated. |
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=== Citations === |
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You've added a good amount of information and have a good number of sources overall. |
You've added a good amount of information and have a good number of sources overall. |
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