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== Which article are you evaluating? ==
Kisho Kurokawa{{Citation |title=Kisho Kurokawa |date=2026-03-26 |work=Wikipedia |url=https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kisho_Kurokawa&oldid=1345466514 |access-date=2026-04-25 |language=en}}
== Why you have chosen this article to evaluate? ==
I began learning about the topic "metabolism" via Fumihiko Maki. I was interested in his works and found another person who worked heavily with Metabolism - Kisho Kurokawa. The adaptability/evolution of existing structures intrigued me and lead me to want to evaluate this article.
== Evaluate the article ==
Kurokawa's page seems underdeveloped in certain aspects. I feel as though the lead sentence gives a great general statement about what is planned to be spoken on. Although often, most major/main details in his biography seem to be mentioned, but then cut off too soon to hear any further information, to then just switch to another, semi-related detail. I feel as though his involvement with the, as said, "cofounding of the metabolism movement", was too brief and likewise to that of an explantaion as to what the metabolism movement was and why it began.
There are also several citations needed in which are missing; providing those would definitely be more helpful for context, as all the listed projects seem irrelevant until there's an explanation as to how/why they're important. Without the citations, it feels more like a list than an analysis.
The tone is very neutral, but in some instances, parts sound pretty positive and not quite as neutral as they should be. Overall, it seems incomplete, but with a good foundation to work upon. I believe a better, more in depth, lead, stronger sources + citations, and more explanation of his work will improve this article.
== Which article are you evaluating? ==
Kisho Kurokawa{{Citation |title=Kisho Kurokawa |date=2026-03-26 |work=Wikipedia |url=https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kisho_Kurokawa&oldid=1345466514 |access-date=2026-04-25 |language=en}}
== Why you have chosen this article to evaluate? ==
I began learning about the topic "metabolism" via Fumihiko Maki. I was interested in his works and found another person who worked heavily with Metabolism - Kisho Kurokawa. The adaptability/evolution of existing structures intrigued me and lead me to want to evaluate this article.
== Evaluate the article ==
Kurokawa's page seems underdeveloped in certain aspects. I feel as though the lead sentence gives a great general statement about what is planned to be spoken on. Although often, most major/main details in his biography seem to be mentioned, but then cut off too soon to hear any further information, to then just switch to another, semi-related detail. I feel as though his involvement with the, as said, "cofounding of the metabolism movement", was too brief and likewise to that of an explantaion as to what the metabolism movement was and why it began.
There are also several citations needed in which are missing; providing those would definitely be more helpful for context, as all the listed projects seem irrelevant until there's an explanation as to how/why they're important. Without the citations, it feels more like a list than an analysis.
The tone is very neutral, but in some instances, parts sound pretty positive and not quite as neutral as they should be. Overall, it seems incomplete, but with a good foundation to work upon. I believe a better, more in depth, lead, stronger sources + citations, and more explanation of his work will improve this article.
