User:Mr10209839/Adam and Eve/Oceanofgrace Peer Review
I did a peer review of these edits.
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==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
@Mr10209839
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[User:Mr10209839/Adam and Eve/Bibliography]]
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;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Adam and Eve]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
I did not see an outline for the proposed changes, but the annotated references page had a few solid references that I think can enhance the overall article. I saw that the first source had a lot of detail and dove into the themes of creation and the fall of humanity which is in the article being edited. The second source seemed effective as well because it talks about how the story evolved over time, which I think can provide unique insight to broaden the scope of the topic. As it covers topics such as gender and human nature and their implications on the present, it can make the story more understandable, relatable, and relevant to readers nowadays.
==General info==
;Whose work are you reviewing?
@Mr10209839
;Link to draft you're reviewing
;[[User:Mr10209839/Adam and Eve/Bibliography]]
;
;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
;[[Adam and Eve]]
== Evaluate the drafted changes ==
I did not see an outline for the proposed changes, but the annotated references page had a few solid references that I think can enhance the overall article. I saw that the first source had a lot of detail and dove into the themes of creation and the fall of humanity which is in the article being edited. The second source seemed effective as well because it talks about how the story evolved over time, which I think can provide unique insight to broaden the scope of the topic. As it covers topics such as gender and human nature and their implications on the present, it can make the story more understandable, relatable, and relevant to readers nowadays.
