User:EpicoKnight/Felipillo/Coldgod05 Peer Review
Evaluate the drafted changes
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Tone and Balance: I believe edits were made as an attempt to ensure that the article reamined neutral. |
Tone and Balance: I believe edits were made as an attempt to ensure that the article reamined neutral. |
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Source and Reference: No changes were made to references and sources. However, is there any more secondary sources you could pull from such as Stern? Look into Between Worlds: Interpreters, Guides and Survivors Account (Karttunen). I'm unsure if she mentions Felipillo but could be possible. |
Source and Reference: No changes were made to references and sources. However, is there any more secondary sources you could pull from such as Stern? Look into Between Worlds: Interpreters, Guides and Survivors Account (Karttunen). I'm unsure if she mentions Felipillo but could be possible. Lastly, I looked into the Spanish version and notice a more developed article, that included more secondary sources. |
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