User:Adschiffman/Choose an Article
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== Article Selection ==
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.
=== Option 1 ===
; Proprioception:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There are some minority viewpoints accurately described. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have enough pictures to help readers understand. Probably could be organized in a way that's easier to digest for beginner learners. I would say this article is well developed.:
;# "Clinical Test of Sensory Interaction on Balance (CTSIB) | Interacoustics". ''www.interacoustics.com''. Retrieved 2025-08-29.
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=== Option 2 ===
; Autumn leaf color:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. I think this article could benefit from more professional organization in order to make the information seem more verifiable and scientific on a higher level.:
; Mort, Richard L.; Jackson, Ian J.; Patton, E. Elizabeth (2015-02-15). "The melanocyte lineage in development and disease". ''Development''. '''142''' (4): 620–632. [[Doi (identifier)|doi]]:10.1242/dev.106567. [[ISSN (identifier)|ISSN]] 0950-1991. [[PMC (identifier)|PMC]] 4325379. [[PMID (identifier)|PMID]] 25670789.:
=== Option 3 ===
; Torque:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have enough pictures to help readers understand. Think article could benefit from being organized in a way that leads into other sections to build collective knowledge on the subject.:
; http://www.physnet.org/modules/pdf_modules/m34.pdf:
=== Option 4 ===
; Cast-iron cookware:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise but it does provide some information that is not present in the article which is an issue. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors, however this article lacks proper citation of these sources which is an issue. More depth, length and a better organization based on a sequence of information that builds on itself would be helpful.:
; "Reverse Sear, Grilling Temps, When To Cook Hot & Fast, When To Cook Low & Slow, And When To Do Both". ''BBQ & Grilling In Depth''. February 22, 2015. Retrieved June 26, 2019.:
=== Option 5 ===
; DeVonta Smith:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does in fact provide some information that is not present in the article which is an issue. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There are some minority viewpoints accurately described, or niche facts and perspectives. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have interesting enough pictures to help readers understand the significance.:
; https://www.heisman.com/heisman-winners/devonta-smith/:
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.
=== Option 1 ===
; Proprioception:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There are some minority viewpoints accurately described. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have enough pictures to help readers understand. Probably could be organized in a way that's easier to digest for beginner learners. I would say this article is well developed.:
;# "Clinical Test of Sensory Interaction on Balance (CTSIB) | Interacoustics". ''www.interacoustics.com''. Retrieved 2025-08-29.
:
=== Option 2 ===
; Autumn leaf color:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. I think this article could benefit from more professional organization in order to make the information seem more verifiable and scientific on a higher level.:
; Mort, Richard L.; Jackson, Ian J.; Patton, E. Elizabeth (2015-02-15). "The melanocyte lineage in development and disease". ''Development''. '''142'''
=== Option 3 ===
; Torque:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does not provide information that is not present in the article. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have enough pictures to help readers understand. Think article could benefit from being organized in a way that leads into other sections to build collective knowledge on the subject.:
; http://www.physnet.org/modules/pdf_modules/m34.pdf:
=== Option 4 ===
; Cast-iron cookware:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise but it does provide some information that is not present in the article which is an issue. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors, however this article lacks proper citation of these sources which is an issue. More depth, length and a better organization based on a sequence of information that builds on itself would be helpful.:
; "Reverse Sear, Grilling Temps, When To Cook Hot & Fast, When To Cook Low & Slow, And When To Do Both". ''BBQ & Grilling In Depth''. February 22, 2015. Retrieved June 26, 2019.:
=== Option 5 ===
; DeVonta Smith:
; Yes, the lead includes an introductory sentence, but does not provide a description of the articles major sections. The lead is concise and does in fact provide some information that is not present in the article which is an issue. The articles content is relevant and up to date, there is nothing that does not belong. The article is neutral and unbiased. There are some minority viewpoints accurately described, or niche facts and perspectives. There is no persuasion going on. There are plenty of thorough sources to back up the facts that are current and written by a diverse spectrum of authors. It is well written but does not have interesting enough pictures to help readers understand the significance.:
; https://www.heisman.com/heisman-winners/devonta-smith/:
